The intro was great! I like the way you played with effects but didn't over do it... as for the continuation it sounds good:)
Thanks alot for your review. I hope i can continue to do so ^^
I'm glad i got to hear this cos i love it... you kept it interesting and your breaks in the beat and different parts made the song sound great... the voice at 1:41 would be nicer if it were abit lower but... details... the ending could use some work... love it man!
I love it cos its somethin' different... So great work for that... it has a nice feel but as said before... a mixer is wat daz needz... Keep it up man!
Good but needs a stronger melody...
The way you play with the bass is great and the beat was average... you should add a stronger melody to the song... the break at 02:28 wasn't very nice but still ok... perhaps you should work on it abit... the rest was sweet :) great work
I like how you brought in new sounds to the high-register around the middle of the song.... perhaps you could have tweeked beat abit here and there to keep it interesting... its a great song so thanks for entertaining me for a good 4min50sec of my life!:)
Cool, thanks for reviewing! :)
Great job! Love this shit!
you stuck well to the theme you chose and used simple sounds creatively :) the result was better than crack cocaine!... some of the breaks and parts came in quite abrumptly especially the break at around 1:41... perhaps you could have faded into it instead... this is an awsome tribute and i can imagine mario dancing to this XD great job.
The gun sounds at the end were an interesting way of ending the song... I read a previous review that said the choir was rough with no effects or anything... well i dont think it was that important cos the plain simple sound without reverb or anything actually matched the rest of the song quite well.
Keep it up man and don't let haters get you down!:)
wont do boss!
Nice slow sweet!
The build up was kick ass! The break with just the strings and the piano came in just right!:) loved it! I think this song brings out the soft set of emotions in the listener very well!
Keep it up man!:)
I like how all the parts and effects fell into place almost perfectly:)
the build up at the start sounded good to me...
my ony critique is the song is a wee bit too long but by no more than a min...
All in all its great!
haha ite soz for that il try to make it les repetetive in future songs..
Abit plain but still nice...
Its good but perhaps you should add some rythm guitar in to fill up more of the mid-low register...
Has an interesting feel...
Thank you, and I intend on adding a better rhythm section, and making this piece much longer..... I think you will like the finished product if you like this. It may take some time, but I will post it I promise.
Thank you for your kind words.
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